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0 posted 2004-04-25 01:59 AM



Firefly

I saw it once and not again
though I can see it now,
one small and unapologetic burst,
one bubble of drifting light
as it arrayed the darkness
of a breath warm evening,
and for that moment
I was not alone.

One light, one time
and then no more
though I looked and waited,
yet somehow that smallest flare
completed something deep,
a hollowing down inside there
that I hadn’t known about;
or maybe it was a simple need
for something to come
just there, just then,
just as it happened to be.

I’ve heard they’re gone by daylight
but I hope it wasn’t so.
I hope it lived that night,
flashed again somewhere
and found its own.
Such beauty should, you know;
it ought to last for longer than
one spark, one single night.
It really, really ought to last.

© Copyright 2004 Ed Ratledge - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-04-25 02:10 AM



RatL.,
  It is so good to hear you!  You bring such imagery to the blue.  No fireflies here yet, but the trillium is in bloom.  (Can't believe I misspelled trillium and had to edit. I guess that's what happens when one is tired.)
  I love this.  Another trip to the library.  You're going to wear me out!   Especially liked the first stanza.
                  Sadie

    


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2 posted 2004-04-25 02:16 AM


No fireflys here at all, ever...they don't live west of the mountains. Tonight I was just thinking about some things like fireflys, and remembering.

I do envy you that trillium... They grow here but I don't have 'em, and at this time of year I miss that gentle blue in the morning almost as much as I miss fireflys.

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3 posted 2004-04-25 02:24 AM


   My cousins don't have them in some of the southern states either-I guess we're just lucky.  
  Please excuse my earlier reference if you read it.  I got you confused with someone else, but in re-reading found I had addressed the wrong person.  Sorry!!! If you think this is bad, you should see how I am with remembering faces!  The Pits!  

                Sadie

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4 posted 2004-04-25 04:20 AM


so brief it is
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5 posted 2004-04-25 04:36 AM


So nice to see your words again Ed, was wondering where you'd wandered off to. Or maybe i'm not in the main forums enough
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6 posted 2004-04-25 06:26 AM


Such beauty should, you know;
it ought to last for longer than
one spark, one single night.
It really, really ought to last.

~*~

Like your poetry...
a spark of genius...

it will last, you know.

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7 posted 2004-04-25 06:35 AM


Ed...you want fireflys...we give your fireflys.
Get on a plane mid-July and come back to
Missouri for a visit.  We have an extra bedroom.
Bring  your lovely wife.

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8 posted 2004-04-25 07:27 AM


Ahh, to enjoy the wonders of life, even in their short existence.
Beautiful, very beautiful.
Love, Margherita

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9 posted 2004-04-25 05:13 PM


Ed -- I agree, it really, really ought to last!  This was gorgeous!  
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10 posted 2004-04-26 12:19 PM


Thanks for reminding me.
I enjoy them immensly every summer.
Even have some in my yard.

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11 posted 2004-04-26 01:13 PM


Such beauty should, you know;
it ought to last for longer than
one spark, one single night.
It really, really ought to last.

How poignantly you've captured the magical moments that touch our lives... and the hole left in our hearts when mundane rules again. The only thing that keeps this from being heartbreaking in its longing is the knowledge that such beauty does last... for those who pause to really see... and for those who read your words. *S*

This is stunning, dear friend... excellent write!

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12 posted 2004-04-27 05:32 PM


Ed....

One day I will see a firefly, but until then, your words light up the page...I've missed reading them!  

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13 posted 2004-04-27 10:19 PM


I hope you do, Martie. I truly hope you do get to see that light.

There's magic in it, you know. The real kind, that doesn't depend on spells or cards or tricks of crowd control psychology.

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14 posted 2004-04-28 02:42 AM


Ed -- heard it was your birthday -- know what I'm giving you??????   Another trip to the top of PIPworld!   Happy, happy birthday to ONE TERRIFIC POET!   ...jo    
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15 posted 2004-04-28 09:13 PM


Welcome back, Ed, and happy birthday! It's good to see you again!
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16 posted 2004-04-30 12:37 PM


Just stopped in for a second reading(actually more because I read it several times each stop)!  I love the gentle rhyme in this and assonance. The imagery is superb.

I find I missed your birthday.   Firing this back up.  Happy belated birthday!

          Sadie

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