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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2004-04-25 01:53 AM


Wait A Minute Please


I waited for her minute
and she spoke of going home
to silky mountain trails,
far away in sight of Mt. Fuji,
that was where her family dwelled.
Many years ago I had been there,
and I yearned to return another day,
she said when I did I should stop to see her,
she lived in the house I had passed along the way.
Then it happened, a kiss from the woman I admired.
While in the arms of her sweet caress,
her cherry lips quenched my thirst of desire.


JamesLee
April24
2004

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2004-04-25 04:20 AM


sweet
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2 posted 2004-04-25 01:38 PM


~~**~~
The way you move me
I walk with your shadow
With your silhouette
Leave the light on
It always comes
Back to you
~~**~~

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2004-04-25 01:42 PM


Sweeet....  

To have lived the dream of a love so true...
   is to have seen a glimpse of heaven.

Grover
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4 posted 2004-04-25 01:45 PM


Oh yes...
Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2004-04-25 05:18 PM


JamesMichael~
The romance of you is just what this day needed~
Thank you~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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iliana
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6 posted 2004-04-25 05:21 PM


James, this was so nice -- hope there is more to this story someday!  
azblond
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7 posted 2004-04-25 05:23 PM


This was great...a bit of a teaser letting my imagination run wild...

Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind...

AniKay83
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8 posted 2004-04-25 07:22 PM


"her cherry lips quenched my thirst of desire."
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Sweet.
Been awhile since I been here. Nice to come straight to this tasty piece.
~Chrissy

smooth people stray by slinking onward
to the limousine-society
found in alleys hot
with Humanity in passing

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