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icebox
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0 posted 2004-04-24 10:23 PM



The secret waits for the insight
of eyes unclouded by longing;
those who are bound by desire
reach only the outward shell.

The Way is a watershed
from which awareness flows;
life is the flood plain and
the female of existence
tranquil, underneath,
it overcomes the male.

A deep pool the Way is,
never to run dry.
Where it may flow
I do not know
for it is as a preface to God.
  
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Local Rebel
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1 posted 2004-04-24 11:15 PM


ah... Plato speaks...
icebox
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2 posted 2004-04-25 12:19 PM


*laugh*

You mock me gently.  I take it as a thing of friendship.  Thank you.

passing shadows
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3 posted 2004-04-25 04:37 AM


so that's the Way

thank you

Kaoru
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4 posted 2004-04-25 06:18 AM


Ahh..as in a relief of awe.

lovely. well written. I mustn't be technical now.

Margherita
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5 posted 2004-04-25 07:33 AM


A deep pool the Way is,
never to run dry.
Where it may flow
I do not know
for it is as a preface to God.


Then you do know!
Mystery is part of our sacred lives.
Very beautiful and insightful write.
Love, Margherita

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2004-04-25 07:41 AM


icebox
What ever you're looking for you're getting closer. Well done

Earth Angel
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7 posted 2004-04-25 08:33 AM


The secret waits for the insight
of eyes unclouded by longing;
those who are bound by desire
reach only the outward shell.

The Way is a watershed
from which awareness flows;
life is the flood plain and
the female of existence
tranquil, underneath,
it overcomes the male.

A deep pool the Way is,
never to run dry.
Where it may flow
I do not know
for it is as a preface to God.

~ SAVED!

Drink deep, dear poet!
EA

Aenimal
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8 posted 2004-04-25 01:12 PM


Yes.
Midnitesun
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Gaia
9 posted 2004-04-25 01:21 PM


Will Q#543 still lead me the same Way?
Making me think it through, again.

iliana
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10 posted 2004-04-25 01:26 PM


I don't know where you went for the last couple of weeks, but maybe I need to visit that place, too!  Enjoyed this very much.      .....jo
Local Rebel
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11 posted 2004-04-25 05:33 PM


Of course... you're welcome.


Martie
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12 posted 2004-04-28 10:18 PM


icebox

I hope that your questioner never runs dry...for your answers are so insightful.  Thank you for this.  

Honeybunch
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13 posted 2004-04-29 03:26 PM


Icebox, you're amazing!  I think the secret lies in the eyes "not being clouded by longing" as you so aptly put it.  If we can only overcome our many longings we may find the peace we seek.  I battle with this aspect even though I know it be "the Way".
Goodknight
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14 posted 2004-04-29 10:55 PM


a poem that sets the mind to ponder - you write it well - Paul
Elizabeth Santos
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15 posted 2004-04-30 03:45 AM


Yes, "eyes unclouded by longing"...Yes
Susan Caldwell
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16 posted 2004-04-30 09:22 AM


"The secret waits for the insight
of eyes unclouded by longing;
those who are bound by desire
reach only the outward shell."

I have lived this lie in one form or another...

  you are amazing.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

Nan
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17 posted 2004-04-30 08:32 PM


Would that we might know
The Way our paths meander
Intrinsic Wisdom

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18 posted 2004-06-09 03:38 PM


Just wondering.....how many questions are there in this series? I don't think I've ever heard any of them, but they certainly seem intriguing.....

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