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dingusjr
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0 posted 2004-04-24 09:17 PM



She told him
she could make a lot of money dancing
but if he would just work, she wouldn't.
And while she takes off her clothes
for other men,
bares her breasts,
and grinds upon their laps,
he sits at home drinking beer
and hating every minute of it.

© Copyright 2004 Larry W. Allen - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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1 posted 2004-04-25 01:33 AM


Nice writing...James
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2 posted 2004-04-25 02:01 AM


Eww, and I think I know that guy.... he looks just like this intimate picture you've painted, but then those guys do tend to look alike.

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passing shadows
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3 posted 2004-04-25 04:21 AM


ouch
Sunshine
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4 posted 2004-04-25 06:34 AM



Looking for a word here...
I guess Excellent
will have to do!

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5 posted 2004-04-25 06:53 AM


There are probably a lot of situations
like that, where the women don't really
want to do what they're doing.

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Susan Caldwell
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7 posted 2004-04-28 07:50 AM


oh yes...

There is always a warning..they just don't listen..

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

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