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jennirey
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since 2002-01-24
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North Richland HillsTx

0 posted 2004-04-24 12:42 PM



The focus of ones heart can be disturbing sometimes.
We are creatures of habit weather good for us or not.
We constantly relive those mistakes that beget us in the beginning.
Choices made with out our hesitation.
No solid founded thought process and a choice has been made that tends to cause havoc on our wee little lives.

I have learned that I have not learned much
through my previous experiences
I continue to race to crawl through some peril or another.
We are creatures of habit weather good for us or not.
The focus of ones heart can be disturbing sometimes.

© Copyright 2004 Jennifer Reynoso - All Rights Reserved
Grover
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since 2004-01-27
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London, ON, Canada
1 posted 2004-04-24 02:35 PM


Wise words.
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
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displaced
2 posted 2004-04-24 02:49 PM


agreeing with Grover
jwesley
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since 2000-04-30
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Spring, Texas
3 posted 2004-04-24 03:04 PM


Very well done!!

jwesley

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