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rainydaymusic
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0 posted 2004-04-24 01:13 AM


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Feeling fine, I don’t feel so
fine anymore, but don’t worry
because I am okay
but I’m just not feeling fine

It’s these new words that
get me the most
get me down, you know,
terminal and counts,
chronic and blood,
just killer.

Well it’s just words to me
cause you still look normal to me
and words never took nothing
away from me
and still won’t this time,
lovely friend of mine.

Are you feeling fine?
Is that what I’ll ask?
Fine is a word like any other
a lazy word, a non committal word
a stupid word
a word like me

I stopped eating yesterday
gave up sleeping too
To be honest, I don’t feel so fine anymore
but I am okay
and how are you?

We used to say well,(edited by moderator) ,
and laugh.
Well, (edited by moderator) .  But especially (edited by moderator).


[This message has been edited by garysgirl (04-24-2004 02:37 PM).]

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rainydaymusic
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1 posted 2004-04-24 01:15 AM


thats dumb, censoring curse words.  Isn't this a poetry forum?  Aren't poets a little radical?  Isn't this free speech?   I really mean those words I say there, and yet the website censors them?  what the hell..lol
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2 posted 2004-04-24 01:50 PM


the cuss words are not allowed here in open, this is a family site--

~~**~~
The way you move me
I walk with your shadow
With your silhouette
Leave the light on
It always comes
Back to you
~~**~~

garysgirl
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3 posted 2004-04-24 02:38 PM


The asteriks are also not allowed........
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