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Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

0 posted 2004-04-24 12:50 PM

                       Hazardous Verse

                       As I left the road, briefly,
                       rounding the curve,
                       and gravelled along
                       the shoulder with
                       two wheels,
                       I met a carrier hauling
                       a load of
                       repairable wrecks.
                       I suppose that
                       I should keep my eyes on
                       my driving,
                       instead of on
                       my notepad.

                       But then, when
                       would i write
                       my road poems?

Local Rebel
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-21

Posts 5767
Southern Abstentia

1 posted 2004-04-24 01:50 AM

Better for potry than a cell phone...

But only the young die good... hang around awhile longer...

keep writin em like this

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

2 posted 2004-04-24 08:55 AM

As poets, some of us are obliged to live what we're writing, as that's what we do. But the key word here is LIVE, so be careful, as we want to continue enjoying you, and I did enjoy!!! ~S~

Music washes away from the soul the dust of everyday life

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2004-04-24 09:52 AM

I am going to find a map
with rest stops, just for you!

Don't you ever quit writing!
I enjoy you too much!

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2004-04-24 09:55 AM

Whew! That was a close one, Dear Daddy of Kraws! I enjoy reading your poetry ~ but not at the expense of you losing your life! Oh, no! That would never do! But if that were to happen, I would willing channel your poetry from the beyond through automatic writing! ~ and I would make sure you got all the credit when I posted them! lol

EA

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

5 posted 2004-04-24 10:18 AM

LOL, I like this Kraw. You'd better be careful, though I do know what you're talking about. I'm getting as bad with my photography as I am my writing notes for a poem. Not too long ago I took some pictures (riding in the car) across the bay bridge????

Needless to say, I was lectured from everybody when they say the pictures. LOL
Hugs,
Ethel

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

6 posted 2004-04-24 10:23 AM

liked it!!!!!

SimplyGold
Senior Member

since 2002-07-10

Posts 1453

7 posted 2004-04-24 11:20 AM

Krawdad,

Scarey, take of yourself. There is only one, yes one Krawdad and we do not want to lose you for poetry's sake or for any other reason. I often write outside my experience and draw from conceptualization, perhaps you are doing the same (though I think not