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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2004-04-23 08:21 PM

My heart sees
In clarity and calm

To pour upon you
Ancient and renewing balm

So crystal clear
When all that you may fear might lay exposed

My heart sees
What the limit of these frail eyes may not suppose

My heart knows
So vividly devout

The truth comes
With no way to be found out

Reluctance never shared
In aching void that echoes deep inside

My heart knows
The footpath to the caves where tears are dried

Copyright Kkh 4/23/04

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2004-04-23 08:55 PM

My heart knows
The footpath to the caves where tears are dried

It does, doesn't it.....might you show me
the way.....

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

2 posted 2004-04-23 09:29 PM

wow, magnus beat me to it ... that line really struck me too ... great write, my friend.

jwesley

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

3 posted 2004-04-24 06:46 PM

Hey, this is very good!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2004-04-24 06:49 PM

"My heart knows
The footpath to the caves where tears are dried"

Wonderful your writing...always touches deep.
Hugs~

To have lived the dream of a love so true...
is to have seen a glimpse of heaven.

azblond
Senior Member

since 1999-07-01

Posts 637
The Steamy Desert

5 posted 2004-04-24 06:51 PM

That last line...as you can telll...the hook that gets us all. I love it...love it...love it.

Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind...

Sadelite
Member Elite

since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

6 posted 2004-04-25 12:25 PM

My heart sees
In clarity and calm

To pour upon you
Ancient and renewing balm

So crystal clear
When all that you may fear might lay exposed

This sounds so caring and empathetic, and yes, so very poetic. I enjoyed this very much each time I read it. I agree with the others- the last line really catchy. Fantastic write.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2004-04-25 05:08 AM

how beautiful!

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

8 posted 2004-04-25 05:58 AM

I like this a lot and I love this line...

"The footpath to the caves where tears are dried"

Eric

Ain't doin nothin at all
Just answerin the call
Kinda driftin away from it all~~~~~

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

9 posted 2004-04-25 08:23 AM

I love the Pureness of your perceptions.
So beautifully shared.
Love, Margherita

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

10 posted 2004-04-25 02:52 PM

TD -- I see our truths are similar. Wonderful, wonderful writing and one for me to save!

......jo

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