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Rain Coming Down

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vandana
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Sun has gone away
Slowly drifting away
To tomorrow's dream
Dreams that were meant to be,
Rain coming down
on my head,
See no sun today,
So it will be pouring
down on me,
Rain coming down on me,
Rain coming down on me,
Reminding me of the time,
The time we had it all,
But it seems that I didn't care,
at all
When you call
upon me
Rain that still coming down
Sun has gone away,
Soon,
You will see rain,
At the spring time,
Summer's,
Winter 's fall,
Rain still will be coming down
Rain coming down,

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Grover
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1 posted 04-23-2004 06:25 PM       View Profile for Grover   Email Grover   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Grover's Home Page   View IP for Grover

Hey, this would make a nice song... I enjoyed this. Thanks for sharing!
Seymour Tabin
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vandana
I too think it would make a nice song.
Marge Tindal
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SweetVanDana~
And at the end of all the rain ...
the sun, lighting a rainbow to grace your heart~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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it always does...doesn't it?
Greeneyes
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5 posted 04-23-2004 07:09 PM       View Profile for Greeneyes   Email Greeneyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Greeneyes

so beautiful I love the rain!

~~**~~
The way you move me
I walk with your shadow
With your silhouette
Leave the light on
It always comes
Back to you
~~**~~

JamesMichael
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Enjoyed...James
Sadelite
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vandana,
   this is very pretty;  I enjoyed it
              Sadelite
Snowflake From Hell
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rain can be soothing depending on how you see it...well done

Victims....aren't we all?

Artic Wind
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enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND
 
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