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LeeJ
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0 posted 2004-04-23 10:50 AM


Mimosa Blooms

Informants of life, pools earsplitting hope
Reaching for poetic aura, famous arms elope
Locking potential, nose of visions avalanche precision
In hands of imperfect smiles…reality’s mission

Quietude scatters transient jewels
Deeply vibrant warmth of beauty
Turns clockwise equilibrium, grabbing zest
Sweet belongings finding focus cannot forget

Do you believe where the sun lays to rest?
Without one second look or regret
A dreamer’s dream turns eyes for living
In store’s moist earthen globe of giving

Quality rings ambiance boisterous
Interpreting design of mind’s canvass
Plunging into outward playing moods
Scampering with heart to a certitude

Sweet memory heavy with time
Shivers with the kiss of rhyme
Looking for ships in harbors shelter
Taming a wilderness to wonder

Within the lullaby of home
Elixir tresses the face of loved ones
Shinny white scarf of faith
My soul bears your port of name


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Margherita
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1 posted 2004-04-23 11:04 AM


quote:
Sweet memory heavy with time
Shivers with the kiss of rhyme
Looking for ships in harbors shelter
Taming a wilderness to wonder


Words found in the magician's hat!
Beautiful!
Love, Margherita

garysgirl
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2 posted 2004-04-23 11:36 AM


Sweet memory heavy with time
Shivers with the kiss of rhyme
Looking for ships in harbors shelter
Taming a wilderness to wonder

Within the lullaby of home
Elixir tresses the face of loved ones
Shinny white scarf of faith
My soul bears your port of name

Lee, this is very beautiful writing.
i really enjoyed reading it.
Hugs  
Ethel



passing shadows
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3 posted 2004-04-23 11:58 AM


you are incredible with words
JL
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4 posted 2004-04-23 02:01 PM


I must agree with all the above.  Your poetic talent shines through in this write.
JL


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