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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2004-04-23 09:46 AM



Lost Intentions


It's only a walk away, there
where the start of a day
brings the sunshine and the warmth
of nature's touch to my body,
to my eyes, dare I take the chance.

So I walk my thoughts, there
where the silence doesn't scream
and I can feed upon existence
without expectations of answers
that treat time without importance.

Laid out before me, the springing of earth,
the recharging of life, energy to flush out
the poisons of a yesterday that
left me thirsty for reason and an aftermath
feeling secondhand.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

© Copyright 2004 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
1 posted 2004-04-23 11:14 AM


Take the chance M! You are aware of Spring, but you keep the door closed.
Profound reflections.
Love, Margherita

Opeth
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since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543
The Ravines
2 posted 2004-04-23 11:26 AM


Maureen,

The first thought that came to my mind was this... profound.

Enjoyed!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
3 posted 2004-04-23 11:28 AM


I need to go walking to find some inspiration

good piece...got me thinking

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
4 posted 2004-04-23 05:21 PM


Margherita, thanks for reading..it was a pretty day out.

Opeth,  smiling...I always enjoy your viits, thank you
M

Dixie, take a walk..and just look around, there has to be inspiration somewhere out there

M

  

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