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Open Poetry #32

ihop pre-od south 101

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2004-04-23 08:36 AM

she fed him breakfast
rooty tootie fresh and fruity
paid with her tips
bought him milk too
said he needed it for his smile

did she not see his eyes?
that he had died in 91
when the needle made a drain
and a hard place in his arm
he said he needed it for his smile

they smoked in the parking lot
he seemed to be cold
so she gave him her coat
and a hug for medicinal purposes
said he needed it for his smile

he gave her a treat
like candy to a 'betic
she purpled her eyes for him
and called him baby
said she needed it for her smile

did he see her eyes as she died?
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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2004-04-23 08:48 AM

Dark Stranger
I'm sure it was mutual, enjoyed

Michelle_loves_Mike

Senior Member

since 2003-12-20

Posts 1189
Pennsylvania

2 posted 2004-04-23 10:37 AM

Sometimes,,we find comfort int he eyes of the dead,,walking or not

Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

3 posted 2004-04-23 12:15 PM

A simple question... very nice write.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

4 posted 2004-04-23 01:41 PM

sad, those purple eyes...they don't tell lies about the dark side

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