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ThisDiamond
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0 posted 2004-04-22 10:05 PM


My lips to taste such longing, every heartbeat
Learning landscapes, coursing into blindness

Mesmerized the full content of sequenced rush

Stronger…deeper into each encouraged blush
Made rose in every silken thrill the full of flower
Filling every famished void in endless timeless hour

All your might in miracles of gravity and give
Every breath entwined our solvency and sieve
Throughout me in its torrent and luminary race

Thriving as it captures sweet delight in every trace
It is this revealing that such marvel wells inside
Your nearness to transcend the realms of ever satisfied

Affection fed discovery and held within both hands
A kiss divulged its messenger explores such fertile lands
Rapture glistens in your voice surrounds me certain glow

Returning sips of ecstasy that only we would know

Copyright Kkh 4/22/04


© Copyright 2004 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
Susan
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1 posted 2004-04-22 10:16 PM


Returning sips of ecstasy that only we would know

Love this line.  Great write.  Enjoyed.

Susan

passing shadows
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2 posted 2004-04-23 12:09 PM


always make me sigh
garysgirl
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3 posted 2004-04-23 12:11 PM


Affection fed discovery and held within both hands
A kiss divulged its messenger explores such fertile lands
Rapture glistens in your voice surrounds me certain glow

Returning sips of ecstasy that only we would know


Oh yes, Kathleen....I know.
Hugs,
Ethel

LeeJ
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4 posted 2004-04-23 12:59 PM


Thriving as it captures sweet delight in every trace
It is this revealing that such marvel wells inside
Your nearness to transcend the realms of ever satisfied

WOW

This entire poem glistens with heartfelt words of love

  

PKreturns
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5 posted 2004-04-23 01:04 PM


Every line is beautiful here. I agree with Susan about that last one though.
Excellent poem. As usual.

Magnus
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6 posted 2004-04-23 06:02 PM


You have a special gift.  Gosh,  the beauty
of this,  of each piece you plant in our
garden at PIP....Superb ....  Your flurbs
are flying...

Marge Tindal
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7 posted 2004-04-23 06:40 PM


Kathleen~

'Affection fed discovery and held within both hands
A kiss divulged its messenger explores such fertile lands
Rapture glistens in your voice surrounds me certain glow

Returning sips of ecstasy that only we would know'


Your romantic poeticism is causing *sighs*~
Delightful on this day~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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