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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The quench of fresh spring rain Drizzled on the hedge again Where perfume of a happy earth Lifts of layers fluttered by That sigh becomes it’s own beguile Lighthearted notes to play awhile Through fabrics thick and thin Levitations sweep the eye A tickling of the leaves just new Enticing them from bud to view Flickering the sheer sarongs Silent breaths exhale Caress upon a china cheek Awaits the sun to finally speak In tremble peeks the unknown sky A fairer graze to sail In line dried scent That wafts the knees of discontent And takes the clouds away A whispered country mile Copyright Kkh 4/22/04 |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Reminds me of a soft quiet rainy day, nothing to do, staring out into the countryside listening to the rain. So relaxing. Thanks. JL  |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
Very beautiful description of a rainy day. These lines really struck me as clever" Caress upon a china cheek Awaits the sun to finally speak" Thanks for the read Jon "Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
I do so enjoy your work. Susan |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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