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ParisGrl
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0 posted 2004-04-22 04:31 PM



I don't know why you have a hold over me like you do, when I first met you I didn't even like you
Now you're the only one I think of, you are the one I want to spend the rest of my life with

I'm afraid to tell you these things.  I'm scared that you don't love me like how I love you.


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Grover
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since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada
1 posted 2004-04-22 04:40 PM


Love is funny sometimes.
JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
2 posted 2004-04-22 06:59 PM


You got IT bad girl.  But that’s good!  Great write.
JL


Susan
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since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
3 posted 2004-04-22 07:54 PM


Ah, I remember this feeling.  I wrote along  similar lines many years ago, and now we've been married for 15 years.  Don't be afraid- have courage, for waters not tested are never swam.

Susan

"i have given myself
you hold my heart
in a fragile clasp
and i am afraid
it will break"

written about 17 years ago.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
4 posted 2004-04-23 02:39 AM


yeah...sigh
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