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Grover
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since 2004-01-27
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London, ON, Canada

0 posted 2004-04-22 04:03 PM



Face Lift


the ironing board is set up
the iron set to operate--
tumble dried or hung out to dry,
all are made wrinkle free
in the same way.


©2004 Grover Gall

© Copyright 2004 Grover Gall - All Rights Reserved
Toerag
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since 1999-07-29
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Ala bam a
1 posted 2004-04-22 04:15 PM


And then, Michael Jackson may appear...and hopefully, without any poor kids on his arm with parents that have "fecies" for brains....
ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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Michigan, USA
2 posted 2004-04-22 04:18 PM


Ever tried those candies that are really tart?  Sweet Tarts!...yeah...that's what came to mind.  Neat write.
TD

JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
3 posted 2004-04-22 04:20 PM


So true.  It all comes out in the wash.
JL


ParisGrl
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4 posted 2004-04-22 04:25 PM


Grover,

Enjoyed.  :-)

~Laura~

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
5 posted 2004-04-22 04:46 PM


Much enjoyed this one Grover!
Hugs~

To have lived the dream of a love so true...
   is to have seen a glimpse of heaven.

Dark Angel
Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

6 posted 2004-04-22 05:50 PM


Very good Grover...

I'm going to keep this.

What are you my god? You touch me like you are my god
What are you my twin? You affect me like you are my twin.

Go Alanis!


passing shadows
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displaced
7 posted 2004-04-23 12:12 PM


neat write G
LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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8 posted 2004-04-23 12:43 PM


very cute, enjoyed and wishing you a happy Friday
Opeth
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since 2001-12-13
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The Ravines
9 posted 2004-04-23 07:33 PM


I am not sure exactly what you meant by this poem... but upon reading it... I thought the iron is a dinosaur and serves no purpose... and, what else could be considered to be, then, an iron?

enjoyed!

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