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Lady In White
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0 posted 2004-04-22 11:59 AM



I am in want
of slipped senses,
freedoms which shall only be found
in your keep.

I could hitch a ride if I
hitched my skirt ~

but no, that was yesterday
and times, they changed,
with singing tidal aires.

My limbs, hung with spanish moss
flirt the breeze,

passing from state of mind to state of desire,
blacktopping memories of escape-ades

because, and for always,
all my highways will
lead to you...

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Enchantress
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1 posted 2004-04-22 12:13 PM


Very very beautiufl Lady~
Much enjoyed the read..
so good to see your words grace these pages once again.
Hugs~

To have lived the dream of a love so true...
   is to have seen a glimpse of heaven.

passing shadows
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2 posted 2004-04-22 12:18 PM


sadly beautiful....good to have you back here again
JL
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3 posted 2004-04-22 12:43 PM


Very nice read.
JL

Dark Angel
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4 posted 2004-04-22 04:56 PM


WOW!

Veryyyy Nice.

Maree

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Stevie Nicks

kayjay
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5 posted 2004-05-17 01:28 PM


No "Rewrite" with this one, just savored thoughts.  Well done.  KJ

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

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