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ctowen
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since 2001-10-18
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Green Mountains of VT

0 posted 2004-04-21 11:29 PM


it begins with a burn
a soft trickling heat
for tightness which I yearn
I can feel its beat

we tingle as it grows
together, complete
its rhythm strongly shows
how such two hearts greet

that special kind of flame
from when true fires meet
and now they burn the same
as one, no defeat

so to feel me closely
let not the time fleet
just feel your heart in me
together, complete


One's outlook can be another's expression.
  

© Copyright 2004 C. Thomas Owen - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2004-04-22 02:24 AM


you made me smile
Grover
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since 2004-01-27
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London, ON, Canada
2 posted 2004-04-23 07:04 PM


Enjoyed!
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-09-09
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In Your Poetic Mind
3 posted 2004-04-23 07:10 PM


beautiful! good to see you posting again...

~~**~~
The way you move me
I walk with your shadow
With your silhouette
Leave the light on
It always comes
Back to you
~~**~~

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2004-04-23 08:11 PM


Enjoyed...James
pictureme
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since 2003-11-28
Posts 248
Ohio, USA
5 posted 2004-04-23 11:07 PM


complete....burn satisfaction!
nice read,
pictureme :-)

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
6 posted 2004-04-25 02:25 PM


you are precious
Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
7 posted 2004-04-25 02:45 PM


Very nice Craig...so good to read you again.
Hugs~

To have lived the dream of a love so true...
   is to have seen a glimpse of heaven.

Juju
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since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429
In your dreams
8 posted 2004-04-25 03:07 PM


ooooo! You made me smile too!

Juju

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