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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2004-04-21 11:22 PM



Beach Color Of Emotion New


I would like
to see a sunrise
in the view
of another’s eyes
where before
the day slipped
sun downed
in watery dip
feel gently
the drops of rain
counting sand
grain by grain
share a beach
oasis all our own
bend and blend
light for our tone
while watching a
lover’s whisper ride
on the splash
of a sweet tide
hold on to aches
that won’t let go
in a constant wave
we want to flow
an emotional
color all new
pigment burning the sky
of me and you


© Copyright 2004 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
ctowen
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Green Mountains of VT
1 posted 2004-04-21 11:43 PM


We seem to share the same thoughts ....

          ... but I could never paint them with such life.

                        I admire your brush and handstrokes.

                        Beautiful thoughts.
            
                                *S

passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2004-04-22 02:29 AM


indeed beautiful
Sudhir Iyer
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Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
3 posted 2004-04-22 03:29 PM


I liked the beautiful colours...

very nice

regards
sudhir

JL
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Texas, USA
4 posted 2004-04-22 07:04 PM


Absolute beauty.  Scenic poetry at its best.
JL


Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow
5 posted 2004-04-22 11:49 PM


This is lovely...Appeasing to the eye.
majnu
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6 posted 2004-04-23 02:23 AM


kryptonite

-majnu
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