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Open Poetry #32

Mood And Moment

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2004-04-21 10:07 PM

Would I speak out of turn?
That din of wheels halting in the fog
That slipped me barefoot into soft grasses
Finality and what the clear mind passes

A rendering of different sides and different stories
That seem to bloom as day before the morning glories
Would I speak out of turn?

That shapes your mind along an oval lined condition
Possibly to strip away forget and inept prohibition
That like the turning orbs that seem to levitate
So too, does the human heart articulate

And possibly there could be layered down
The deeper reasons for your frown
Would I speak out of turn, to learn?

Or would you simply blush among the rush
And know I care enough to let the nightfall hush

Copyright Kkh 4/21/04

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2004-04-21 11:04 PM

"Would I speak out of turn?
That din of wheels halting in the fog
That slipped me barefoot into soft grasses
Finality and what the clear mind passes"

enjoyed this

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
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2 posted 2004-04-22 02:39 AM

nice write...thought-provoking

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

3 posted 2004-06-03 11:37 PM

I loved these lines

"A rendering of different sides and different stories
That seem to bloom as day before the morning glories"

was really surprised that there were so few responses to this very elegant write...lets just bump it back to the top...

JL
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since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA