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you were the tides....

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SEA
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with you


0 posted 04-21-2004 09:38 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for SEA




I walked through the forest
to forget your memory
but it was your voice,
the whispers of every tree

I waited for the rain
to wash me away
to cleanse me of emotions
of my yesterday

the rain became a river
that lead me to you
and left my heart swirling
in pools of aqua blue

the pools became the ocean
I thought at last I would be free
but all along you were the tides
ever pulling me........


~SEA~


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sigh ohhhhhh sigh but you KNEW i would love this...helen
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Lovely flow to this.
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thank you Helen

thanks TD
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4 posted 04-22-2004 02:41 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

touching....so very touching
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I walked through the forest
to forget your memory
but it was your voice,
the whispers of every tree
==========================

the rain became a river
that lead me to you
and left my heart swirling
in pools of aqua blue

the pools became the ocean
I thought at last I would be free
but all along you were the tides
ever pulling me........
========================


I WISH I HAD WROTE THIS!!!!

... and it's you ... you ... you ... you ...
the light changes when you're in the room.

M.B.

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6 posted 04-22-2004 10:31 AM       View Profile for Grover   Email Grover   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Grover's Home Page   View IP for Grover

A well written poem, soft and warm.
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7 posted 04-22-2004 10:38 AM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

Susan...Your writing is incredible..
Love this so much!
Hugs~

To have lived the dream of a love so true...
   is to have seen a glimpse of heaven.

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8 posted 04-22-2004 11:32 AM       View Profile for Greeneyes   Email Greeneyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Greeneyes

sometimes those whipers are to loud for rain and rivers to block the sound, ever pulling of the tides....yes understanding this



~~**~~
The sound of silence calls,
I hear your voice and suddenly
I'm falling, lost in a dream
The echo of our souls meet
~~**~~
PKreturns
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9 posted 04-23-2004 01:17 PM       View Profile for PKreturns   Email PKreturns   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PKreturns

This deserves to be back on top...very beautiful poem. One of your best. And the picture matches it perfectly.
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Gaia


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YES! a fine fine write, wish I'd written this one. Loved the way you pulled the reader in.
LeeJ
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SE PA


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outstanding, beautiful...oh how I love the sea...and your picture looks like a favorite place I love to go in Long Beach Island...wonderfully woven!  Thanks a bunch
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liked this a lot
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SEA~
Oh gal ... this is just my *sighs*~

'I thought at last I would be free
but all along you were the tides
ever pulling me........'


Lovely, lovely, lovely~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~


~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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14 posted 04-23-2004 06:58 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

What JM said, m'dear...

me, too.
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Lovely...the picture reminds me of a place I have been in Florida...James
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It's Gaia, you know . . .

nice poem, too
Duncan
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"I walked through the forest
to forget your memory
but it was your voice,
the whispers of every tree

I waited for the rain
to wash me away
to cleanse me of emotions
of my yesterday"

I see we are still walking in parallel universes.  
I've missed ya ...
azblond
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18 posted 04-24-2004 11:38 PM       View Profile for azblond   Email azblond   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for azblond

I will be saying those last 9 words for days...they have molded in my heart and are now a part of me.  What a wonderful piece!

Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind...

EagleOne
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19 posted 04-25-2004 12:15 AM       View Profile for EagleOne   Email EagleOne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for EagleOne

Moving is the word that comes to mind for me!

"A spring shower was cause to run
Until you twirled me in the rain" ~ BDC

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Floating gently on a cloud....


20 posted 12-01-2004 06:36 AM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

"the pools became the ocean
I thought at last I would be free
but all along you were the tides
ever pulling me........"

...exactly...

*hug*, Lizzie

"Time has told me not to ask for more, one day our ocean will find its shore" ~Nick Drake

 
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