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Chameleon
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Chameleon |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
Chameleon So unexpectedly you called, Inquiring if we perhaps might -- After time apart so well recalled -- Together meet at the break of night. And I, as a fool of heart believe, For truth and love will search within. But you came dressed to eyes deceive -- Wearing a chameleon skin. But I of colors have grown jaded, Now much prefer a shade of Light. So into distance you have faded, My heart's ascended purer flight. And the clouds of false desire, That the winds once blew my way -- A truer Sun has lit a fire And burned the darkness away. CG |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Wow, this is a remarkable write. Great poetry, intriguing story. JL  |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Yes, truly a very good write! |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Oh I like this very much...lots of depth and soul knowing |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
reminds me of something I would write, but I couldn't write it so beautifully |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
I can see you are gaining many fans here at PIP and it is easy to see why. You write of love and romance with such ease. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Take care.......Sue I am in motion |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Trying to figure out the cameleon... for with such inherent beautiful colors...why would that ever change? Neat write. TD |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
No skin do I shed~ only vibrant colors of the rainbow through the prisms of my heart, shinning light into your darkness~crystal clear~no hidden evilness lurks within me~ My transparent heart you see, as glass, reflecting love back....what you see is what you get..no illusions~ that kind of magic is Merlin's magic.... ~Love,Sunny (Thy Lady) Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH |
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*Belabebeautiful*
since 2003-01-03
Posts 696washington, USA |
Beautifully done, I'm glad you were able to move on and see that person in there true light. oh and the second stanza was my favorite! ~Live and Laugh~ The memories are worth the pain when the happiness is outweighs the sorrow |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
i enjoyed this good  |
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SwEeTnSeXy18 Member
since 2000-09-18
Posts 247nc |
CastleGuard: This is very good. Its true how love can make us blind. Best of luck in the future!! Lisa ~in order to gain, you have to lose~ |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
Thank you everyone, I appreciate the responses. TD, my poem is meant to follow the popular belief that chameleons change their color in response to their surroundings. But, the color change is really an important means of communication, and reflects response to temperature, light, and mood. CG |
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