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I can't see my reflection in your eyes...
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I can't see my reflection in your eyes... |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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Dark rasping locks tumbling over similar brows reaching the pale the long dead mess I had forgotten but your remind me of wild horses and that I am afraid of them Still coats of shine find me here romancing in the freedom of sunlight upon their backs like I find myself looking at you in the rains of an emotional day knowing I should look away makes this attraction vile when nothing can be found why do dark eyes haunt colder than ones that lay open as blue sea why do I ask knowing I can only ever see so far into black you don't even show my reflection in your pools you remind me of everything I fear and everything I have loved . . . |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Maybe you need glasses or another set of eyes to look into....good write and very interestingly put into words gal.... |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
“you remind me of everything I fear and everything I have loved” Intense thoughts of confliction. Very interesting read. JL   |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
your remind me of wild horses and that I am afraid of them Still coats of shine find me here romancing in the freedom of sunlight upon their backs ~*~ Ah Gemma...you've got me smiling now! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Wow Gem, just Wow. why do dark eyes haunt colder than ones that lay open as blue sea Just absolutely love this. M Have you any dreams you'd like to sell? |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Mirrors . . . Windows . . . Wells . . . |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Interesting...James |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
very very nice, gemma *s |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
A deeper look may show not your reflection but your Destiny ... ... try blue eyes on for a refreshing viewpoint! Happy to read you, ALWAYS |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
your remind me of wild horses and that I am afraid of them Still coats of shine find me here romancing in the freedom of sunlight upon their backs like I find myself looking at you in the rains of an emotional day ============================ why do dark eyes haunt colder than ones that lay open as blue sea =================================== you remind me of everything I fear and everything I have loved ========================== oh girl....I see my reflection in your words. awesome write gem... love the metaphor and imagery. haunting angsty express. a moth keeper.  ... and it's you ... you ... you ... you ... |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Simply amazing, leaving me simply speechless... |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
I would love to have a cup of tea or coffee with you some day , and i could tell you what i think you mean in your writes , even though i know its way off , maybe though i could be close lol anyway KEEPER FOR SURE , your syle shines like a diamond in this poem dark and light together love this line gemers , you don't even show my reflection in your pools you remind me of everything I fear and everything I have loved ahhhhh |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
you remind me of everything I fear and everything I have loved these lines cut me, i know them too well. Hugs Jeeves |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
And you remind me that sincerity is better than novelty... very sincere gem.. |
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Purple Poet On Wheels Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 145Pittsburgh/Edinboro, PA |
This is about a horse, right? |
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