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Open Poetry #32
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Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26
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Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

0 posted 2004-04-21 10:32 AM


                                                                       ants,
                                                                       one and all
                                                                       fighting for scraps,
                                                                       wasting their breaths
                                                                       spending last gasps of air
                                                                       on the seller of dreams
                                                                       that few know
                                                                       would never
                                                                       come true
    
                                                        yet time
                                            after time after
                                    yet some more time
                        they all queue up wearing
                     their hearts on their sleeves
    to grind their noses upon the ground
              and he, the Fagin amongst men,
                                     walks all over them
                                          laughing lustily
                                              tooth shining
                                                             gold!

                                                                        if that
                                                                        be the Virus
                                                                        of preach


© Copyright 2004 Sudhir Iyer - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
1 posted 2004-04-21 12:32 PM


awesome format! awesome write!
Grover
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since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada
2 posted 2004-04-21 07:25 PM


Yes, an excellent poem!
Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

3 posted 2004-04-21 07:28 PM


I really really like this Sudi.

Keep em comin

Mxx

Have you any dreams you'd like to sell?

Stevie Nicks

Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
4 posted 2004-04-22 07:30 AM


Thank you very much

regards
sudhir

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