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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow 
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I can no longer hold you like I once did.. I can no longer bear the pain that you inflict. Or perhaps I cannot love at all. I tried to wind the clock back, time is such a waste.. once we touched I knew this would not be forever but it would be an eternity before I could mend myself to you. You're wounded hands feel over my scars, but do not recognize them.. and oh, how I wish they could, but you can no longer heal me like you once did.. This skin is pale and cold, my words are fruitless. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
some people just lose their touch... but you can love and you will again |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Once it comes to a certain point..point of no return...you can never go back..no matter how hard you try to make it work out...wasted time...wasted love... ~ARH  love and hugs Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
You have no idea how much I wish I had written this..you have written what I've wanted to say for a long time but never could; not as perfectly as you have. Totally awesome Meg. Maree  Have you any dreams you'd like to sell? |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful write Meg...such an ache to this. Hugs~ To have lived the dream of a love so true... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You do write melancholy with a fine touch... well done, Meghan... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kaoru You sprinkle sadness like sugar in coffee. God write. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
My breathing got slower and slower as I read down the page ~ until it stopped! You may believe your "words are fruitless", but the written ones have the power to control my breathing! ~ May joy replaces all traces of sadness in your life!  Healing hugs, EA |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Settling into an achy resignation? Or perhaps, struggling yourself upright once more. Nicely written. |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
. . . as some fruits age to bitterness |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy your read |
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