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JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2004-04-20 11:57 PM


Suz


I miss
your pretty face,
your beautiful shape.
Suz, come over
and put a smile
on my face.


JamesLee
April20
2004

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GG
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since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532
Lost in thought
1 posted 2004-04-21 01:42 AM


awww..
that's really all I'm left with.. just..
awwwww

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

Grover
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since 2004-01-27
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London, ON, Canada
2 posted 2004-04-21 09:59 AM


Enjoyed.
JamesMichael
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3 posted 2004-04-21 06:48 PM


Thank you GG and Grover for the nice responses...James
ParisGrl
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4 posted 2004-05-05 11:53 AM


James,

I hope she comes back and you smile again.  :-)  Enjoyed.

~Laura~

Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
5 posted 2004-05-05 02:23 PM


Why thank you James!  Oh not for me?

Always a bridemaid...

Seriously, very sweet, I hope she hears.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2004-05-06 12:17 PM


Thank you Paris and Susan for the nice responses...I'll see her Saturday...James
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