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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2004-04-20 11:52 PM


Like Chocolate


When she touches
my skin in her
sweet caress,
I melt like
chocolate
laying in
the hot
sun.


JamesLee
April19
2004

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1 posted 2004-04-21 12:11 PM


How sweet! ~ Literally and otherwise! lol

Aloha hugs,
Linda

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2 posted 2004-04-21 12:15 PM


Nice style...short and sweet
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3 posted 2004-04-21 01:30 AM


nice
Margherita
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4 posted 2004-04-21 05:13 PM


hmmm .... I love chocolate posts!
That's some touch, James!
Love, Margherita

Krawdad
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5 posted 2004-04-21 05:42 PM


first melt and then . . .

warm little piece, this

JL
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6 posted 2004-04-21 05:59 PM


Melting is good!  Good one.
JL

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7 posted 2004-04-21 09:24 PM


I just think it's cause you are sooo sweet
Bonnie j
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8 posted 2004-04-22 01:11 PM


Oh! The Chocolate Monster just flew in and seen this delectable sight. She is melting into these pages of blue so the Chocolate will melt upon her tender awaiting lips.
The Chocolate Monster aka Bon-Bon

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9 posted 2004-04-22 01:18 PM


I wonder if Bon-Bon was going to see this one....
since she is the Chocolate Monster. LOL

James, that is some kind of touch, huh? LOL
Hugs,
Ethel

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10 posted 2004-04-22 01:56 PM


Mmmmmmm.....dang!!

To have lived the dream of a love so true...
   is to have seen a glimpse of heaven.

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