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Alwye

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In the space between moments

0 posted 2004-04-20 09:41 PM

Maddening
the spiral of circlets
splattered on the steaming pavement
a rain of confusion maybe
or misunderstanding at least

She steps gingerly
around the oil-glistened puddles
between the snaking cracks
of the sidewalk and
her life

Don’t stumble…don’t fall
Resist him, resist it all

Quickly she moves
leaving the harsh edges of today
to memory
better leave that smile there, too
it fades in soft shadow showers
Gone now, it seems.

But as she wakes
under the curl of warming sun
resolution evolves into
the myth of a rainy night.

Hey all, I'm alive. Just swamped. College sucks sometimes..

~*Krista Lee Knutson*~

We are, each of us angels with only one wing; and we can only fly by embracing one another.
--Luciano De Crescenzo

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

1 posted 2004-04-20 09:52 PM

Hey Krista!! Great to see you and read you once again!
Loved this write...come back more often and post.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

To have lived the dream of a love so true...
is to have seen a glimpse of heaven.

Dark Angel
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2 posted 2004-04-20 09:57 PM

Krista! Hi, it's wonderful to see you and read you again.

Hope you're well.

Maree

Have you any dreams you'd like to sell?

Stevie Nicks

Martie

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California

3 posted 2004-04-20 11:07 PM

Krista

Glad to see you finding time to write this wonderful poem.

muted

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Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

4 posted 2004-04-21 02:02 AM

loved the descriptions

passing shadows
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displaced

5 posted 2004-04-21 02:06 AM

good to see you

Goldenrose
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6 posted 2004-04-21 05:37 AM

Very Good writing..loved the descriptions of rain...thank you...

Goldenrose.

''There is no need for temples, no need for complicated Philosophies.
My brain and my heart are my temples; my philosophy is kindness''- Dalai Lama

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

7 posted 2004-04-21 06:26 AM

But your poetry still sings! Welcome home, Krista!

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

8 posted 2004-04-21 09:41 AM

Enjoyed your words, Krista...

*s
M

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

9 posted 2004-04-21 09:59 AM

Alwye,
Welcome back and the metaphors pour.
Enjoyed

Grover
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London, ON, Canada

10 posted 2004-04-21 10:02 AM

Good to read your work. Enjoyed!

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light

11 posted 2004-04-21 10:06 AM

Good to read you again and see your charming smile!!!

EA

Alwye

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In the space between moments

12 posted 2004-04-21 10:44 AM

Thanks everyone, it's nice to be back and be writing a little poetry again.

Greeneyes

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In Your Poetic Mind

13 posted 2004-04-22 08:39 AM

lovely this....and love your new picture too....be well ...

~~**~~
The sound of silence calls,
I hear your voice and suddenly
I'm falling, lost in a dream
The echo of our souls meet
~~**~~

Janet Marie
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14 posted 2004-04-22 10:38 AM

But as she wakes
under the curl of warming sun
resolution evolves into
the myth of a rainy night.
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LOVE THAT VERSE!!

HEY YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
whats up groovy girl!!
So great to see you stopping in Krista.

... and it's you ... you ... you ... you ...
the light changes when you're in the room.

M.B.

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