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Akimbo
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Akimbo |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Akimbo You turn to lift me, then love me. I know when your eyes are carving places onto my skin. I feel them like whispers across oceans of shiver. Like fine tattoos, signs appear. Soon, points of interest sway you towards me. Has any other lover savored, favored, such a gentle brand? |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Goosebumps!! Deca! Deca! Deca! Where have you been woman??! Ooooh this is so sensual...mmmm...love it! Now you stay here okay? Hugs~ To have lived the dream of a love so true... |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Ms. Decaflame, I love your sensual writes. Very good and mysterious.....  Hugs, my friend, (don't sstay gone so long) Ethel |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Thanks for sharing this wonderful poem! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"I know when your eyes are carving places onto my skin. I feel them like whispers across oceans of shiver." ~ Deca, you just gave me a few shivers of my own!!!!!   EA |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Very sensual..very!! believe in what your heart feels... |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Agree, agree, agree -- love it. Susan |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
good grief!! This is sooo perfect  |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
loved this |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Deca You are always so lovely and smooth! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oooooh I like this... ALOT!  Have you any dreams you'd like to sell? |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
 YES....she is back!!!! OH YEAH!!!!!!!!!!!! and better than ever..... |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
You draw all with your images, not only a lover but the voyeurs among us. Well done. KJ Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Very, very nice. JL |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Very descriptive piece gal....I liked this one.... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
glad to see you back |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
What delicious descripts...bravo! TD |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Sensual and sophisticated. Loved this much, Deca. Love, Margherita |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
the flame still burns . . . enjoyed this |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely...James |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
This is extraordinarily real and wonderfully expressed. The first of you I've read, but now I'll be watching for more! |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
very nice |
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