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Taking what Matters |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving 
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 Artist: Maria L. Kirk ~ ~ ~ I’m drinking laughter; Oh god the taste is intoxicating... has my head spinning I'm screaming how beautiful it all seems embracing all my arms can possibly hold squeeze tight the phenomenon of light touching everything with the tip of my tongue swallowing whole all that I know and greedily begging for more. No lullaby, I’m walking wide awake stealing everything I could possibly take making it mine... making it mine... making it mine... It’s a beautiful day It's always a beautiful day. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Well this is delightful....I'll have what shes having.  lovely energetic, optimistic, write poetess Dawn. ... and it's you ... you ... you ... you ... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"I'm drinking laughter" "I’m walking wide awake" ~ I adored these memorable lines!!!  Warm hugs and smiles, EA |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
A magical dance in the moonlight, so beautifully combined with your enthusiastic dance of words, dear Dawn. Love, Margherita  |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Ah yes...the magician of child found! Awesome! TD |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Awesome write here Dawn..your words dance down the page happily. Love this piece indeed. Hugs~ To have lived the dream of a love so true... |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
What a pleasure it is to read you Dawn, this is absolutely wonderful... I’m drinking laughter; Oh god the taste is intoxicating... Yes, please send some over. Did you get my email? Maree  Have you any dreams you'd like to sell? |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Dawn This is uplifting with a joyful feeling , they do say laughter as a way of healing Hope |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
NIce to have beautiful days...James |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
 thanks you guys  |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
beautiful Dawn! ~~**~~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I sure need this one some days... (putting in my library) |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
 thank you |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
muted, This has been a joy to read! Truly a pleasure! Sadie |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
What a joyous feel in this. Love days like that. Susan |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Delightful...a joy to read...James |
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