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Open Poetry #32

New Day Dawning

vega
Junior Member

since 2004-04-12

Posts 24
wherever I lay my hat.

0 posted 2004-04-20 02:43 PM

As I walk beneath the morning sun,
how sweet the scent that lingers there.
The mist upon a distant hill
in ghostly spectre forms appear.

The song birds wake the silent hills,
their melodies unite so grand.
And on the grass the crystal dew
reflects the sunlights gentle hand.

The world awakes, a day is born
and tranquil moments do inspire.
A hope of all that's yet to come,
still fills my heart with sweet desire.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2004-04-20 03:15 PM

A very tender write, Vega. Lovely.

vega
Junior Member

since 2004-04-12

Posts 24
wherever I lay my hat.

2 posted 2004-04-20 03:22 PM

Thank you kindly sunshine.

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

3 posted 2004-04-20 03:29 PM

Easy to visualize this view you have poetically portrayed.
Very nice.
JL

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2004-04-20 04:10 PM

This was a very appealing read for me! You captured the dawning of a new day perfectly!

Have a glorious day!

vega
Junior Member

since 2004-04-12

Posts 24
wherever I lay my hat.

5 posted 2004-04-20 04:23 PM

Sunshiny days to you all.

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

6 posted 2004-04-20 04:48 PM

Well written, enjoyed!

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