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Don’t Go In (Ribbit-Ribbit)
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Don’t Go In (Ribbit-Ribbit) |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Don’t Go In (Ribbit-Ribbit) The crocodile comes; he is creeping and creeping… creeping within. He smells your blood and your salty smooth skin. He is slow but sullen, and determined to win… A meal like you, would be such a treat, if he could just grab you, in his jaws and sharp teeth. Your eyes and your ears are blind to his whim, so you dive in the water to have a quick swim… You saw the sign it said not to go in but you had your way, you just wouldn’t listen… The last thing I saw was that crocodile’s grin, as I glanced at the sign which says: “Don’t go in.” (Ribbit-Ribbit) Kermit’s Cousin ~Leap |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
ahhhh, kermy's cousin???? well, yeah, he went in, but the story I heard is that he escaped the jaws of that monster, gave him a great big bop on the nose to boot, that allegator will not be smelling anything to soon, and Kermit and Miss Piggy gave him a their saved cousin a big party, to celebrate new found wisdom!!!! hehehhehhee Cute write you silly bananna..enjoyed and love it when the little guy wins! |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
This could be about a lot more than the surface reveals. What lies beneath the water with the Crocodile? Hmmm, it makes me think in analogies. But on the surface it is great fun too. Susan |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
What a wonderful spin on this message. Good humor is the flavor of life! TD |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
JL, I like this fun write. I didn't know the story, but I do now. I love Kermit. LOL Hugs, Ethel |
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