The Unfathomable Pit of Primal Fear

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Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

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Realms of Light

0 posted 2004-04-20 12:37 PM

With the last vestige of my inner strength, I turn away from the void that threatens to swallow me deep into its abysmal depths.
Icy tentacles of fear grip my tripping heart with each laborious step I take from the brink of no tomorrows.
Loneliness has been my constant companion for far too long and I beg for the glow of love to light my way home.
Yet the pull from the powers of Darkness threatens to overtake my renewed efforts to reach for the Light.
As my resolve weakens, I let go of my tenuous hold on reality and slip into the nothingess that is devoid of all love.
My scream is forever frozen in time as I fall in a downward spiral into the unfathomable pit of primal fear.

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

1 posted 2004-04-20 12:46 PM

This is an exciting read. Enjoyed.
JL

INclan
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since 1999-07-20

Posts 1024
Indiana, USA

2 posted 2004-04-20 12:50 PM

Quoth the Raven, "Nevermore".

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2004-04-20 12:54 PM

a different style for you...much enjoyed though the theme is a bit dark and sad

I like this

vega
Junior Member

since 2004-04-12

Posts 24
wherever I lay my hat.

4 posted 2004-04-20 01:24 PM

Dark, but nonetheless very reaching. Excellent write here. Well done...

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2004-04-20 01:59 PM

Earth Angel
Been there done that, LOL

Decaflame
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since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

6 posted 2004-04-20 02:33 PM

Now, you may awake...

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

7 posted 2004-04-20 02:36 PM

Linda Lou, I hope that this is just your amazing writing,
and not the way you're feeling. I know how the fear
of the unknown can grip someone when they least expect it....
and keep them from doing the very thing that their
heart is telling them to do. It doesn't feel good.
Hugs to you, my sweet friend,
Ethel

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

8 posted 2004-04-20 03:58 PM

JL ~

Thanks for the "exciting" reply!

Warm hugs,
EA

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

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Realms of Light

9 posted 2004-04-20 03:59 PM

INclan ~

lol Yes! Something like that!

Springtime hugs,
EA

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

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Realms of Light

10 posted 2004-04-20 04:00 PM

Dixie ~

Yeppers! Just stretching my poetic wings! lol

Love & Light,
Linda

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

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Realms of Light

11 posted 2004-04-20 04:02 PM

vega ~

My very first car was a Vega! lol

I usually write about the Light and not about the Dark ~ but as they say, there are two sides to every coin!