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JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

0 posted 2004-04-20 11:52 AM

Insatiable Love for You

I can see that rich sweetness in your eyes so true,
I can smell your delicate scent in my mind’s memory too…
Being without you makes for a sad and lonely tune,
I sing and hum it daily, when I reminisce about you…

I hear your soft voice chiming, and your captive silly laugh,
reminding me of how warm you were, just on my behalf.
Why was I so blind, and so miserable not to see,
just how sweet and loving, you really were to me?

I can only guess for now, if your eyes are still as bright,
and hope for you, someone special, to enjoy that glowing light.
I would end this rhyme right now, if there were not this want in me,
this insatiable love for you, will never set me free...

I am captive by my thoughts of you, and surely always will,
until I die, then beyond, I await that moments thrill.
To see you again, to love you again are my prayers and hope to be,
and to someday hear you say, you are still in love with me.

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

1 posted 2004-04-20 11:56 AM

Most have been there. It's a heartbreaker.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

2 posted 2004-04-20 12:01 PM

Wonderful write.
TD

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2004-04-20 12:05 PM

I love your rhyme and rhythm on this one, JL.
And, I hope that your love returns. I know of that
"insatiable love" with someone, too.
Hugs,
Ethel

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2004-04-20 12:06 PM

OH!! This is SOOOO beautiful!!
Hugs~

To have lived the dream of a love so true...
is to have seen a glimpse of heaven.

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

5 posted 2004-04-20 12:10 PM

Unfortunately sometimes its only when we lose someone that we finally relize just what it was we had in the first place. You have written this so very well.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

6 posted 2004-04-20 12:13 PM

heartbeat heard
well done, JL

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

7 posted 2004-04-20 12:39 PM

I feel much the same way !!! this was heartfelt at its best

when I reminisce , I am captivated by thoughts too

Hope

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2004-04-20 12:47 PM

sometimes we have to get by with what we have...for now

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

9 posted 2004-04-20 12:54 PM

JL, this is one of my favorites of yours
Penetrating! Gives much food for thought

You know, knowing you the way I do, I bet she's still in love with you and always reserves a special place for you in her heart...it just wasn't the right time regarding the maturity you both lacked then. Thats not an insult, don't ya know...love to you and yours....Lee J.

vega
Junior Member

since 2004-04-12

Posts 24
wherever I lay my hat.

10 posted 2004-04-20 01:09 PM

Bittersweet memories I think we all share. So many will relate to this I'm sure...... Flows well with true and deep feelings.A well written piece of your thoughts.. Take care.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

11 posted 2004-04-20 11:48 PM

Enjoyed...James

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