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Soleil Noir
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0 posted 2004-04-20 11:28 AM



Shadows Call
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Lingering, this

Wanderer’s lust,

Beseeching limbs,

To where his love,

My love, lives in pause.

Lone pines are soughing,

And he, heeding,

For they carry

My song

To his soul,

Singing

Find her

Again.


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JL
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1 posted 2004-04-20 11:32 AM


And this is a beautiful song too, your song!  Nice read.
JL


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2 posted 2004-04-20 11:47 AM


je comprend
c'est tres bien

Soleil Noir
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3 posted 2004-04-20 11:50 AM



Merci.

Enchantress
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4 posted 2004-04-20 12:03 PM


"For they carry

My song

To his soul,

Singing

Find her

Again."

Ooooh myyyyyyy....Dang!

passing shadows
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5 posted 2004-04-20 12:39 PM


oooooh...soft sigh....this is so touching
muted
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6 posted 2004-04-20 02:09 PM


heck yessss!!

Dark Angel
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7 posted 2004-04-20 04:54 PM


Absolutely lovely Soleil

Have you any dreams you'd like to sell?

Stevie Nicks

MGROVES
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8 posted 2004-04-20 09:31 PM


nice!


kayjay
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9 posted 2004-04-21 10:25 AM


A call any lover would hear in the soul!!  Well done.  KJ
Gentle Spirit
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10 posted 2004-04-21 10:54 AM


ah yes....the call of lovers lust...
very well done...

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