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DragonFang
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0 posted 2004-04-20 06:40 AM


The stars from an endless night
Like a sea of diamonds from afar
Their glitter holding eternal light . . .

A flowered meadow, in silver gleam
Faerie land, of eternal spring
Cloaked within a veil of moon's beam . . .

The soothing song of a forest's brook
With the gentle birds for company
Like a dream from child's storybook . . .

The sun rising in morning's sky
As the radiant smile of a maiden fair
Tis the glad end of a journey took
To where favored dreams shall seek to look.

© Copyright 2004 Samson C. Justice - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-04-20 09:22 AM


this is wonderfully written....

~~**~~
The sound of silence calls,
I hear your voice and suddenly
I'm falling, lost in a dream
The echo of our souls meet
~~**~~

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2 posted 2004-04-20 10:04 AM


beautiful


Grover
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3 posted 2004-04-20 04:54 PM


Very nice!
JL
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4 posted 2004-04-20 07:13 PM


I do agree with all the above.
Great write.
JL

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5 posted 2004-04-21 12:10 PM


Enjoyed...James
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6 posted 2004-04-21 01:51 AM


ditto on the beautiful
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7 posted 2004-04-21 02:08 AM


that last verse is gorgeous!
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