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Michelle_loves_Mike
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0 posted 2004-04-20 02:38 AM



Each tick of the second hand takes an eon

Conversations drone, motions memorized

False smiles hide the face of lonliness

Waiting

Sweet kiss... memory lingers

Faint scent ...held by pillow cradled

Teasing strains...soon...echos

Waiting

Time has stopped without you

Forever I am willing

No longer am I able to cope.....

Waiting

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

© Copyright 2004 Michelle Albright - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-04-20 03:31 AM


ouch...this hurts
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2 posted 2004-04-20 09:57 AM


have not seen you in a while  this was sad  hope your ok  


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3 posted 2004-04-20 07:33 PM


thank you for your kind words,,,I'm fine,,just missing my reason for living,,,,,Mike,,,,,we've been apart almost  2 weeks due to his job,,and I am miserable without him,,,,soon, he comes home,,,,,then my sun will shine again,,,

Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

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4 posted 2004-04-23 07:09 PM


If this had a title, I would give it an A+... since it doesn't...
OK, OK... stop throwing things!!!!! OUCH!!!!!!!!!! STOP THAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!

lol.

This is actually the best I have seen from you, Kiddo. If Mikey doesn't realize how lucky he is to have you, then let me know... I'll beat it into him.

Some people are like Slinkies . . . not really good for anything, but you still can't help but smile when you see one tumble down the stairs...

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5 posted 2004-04-24 01:06 AM


Ok, stop with the sweet stuff Mister,,,,,,he knows hes lucky,,as am I,,,,if any other man ever caught my eye nearly as much,,,,well, I think you know who that is,,,,

Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

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6 posted 2004-05-15 01:33 PM


sure do miss seeing you around here you just not here often enough...just to let you know you arent forgotten
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7 posted 2004-05-15 01:49 PM


Ooooh, so sad.  Hey but look at the bright side when you two are back together again.
Whoo-Hoo!  I wonder what you will pen then?

JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”


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8 posted 2004-05-16 10:00 PM


Nice writing...James
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