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Earth Angel
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0 posted 2004-04-20 01:39 AM



+*+*+*+*+*+
In dawning days of misty times,
Lived a god of ancient rhymes,
Threads were spun from silken mots,
In to an emperor's golden clothes.

He cited poems across the land,
Enthralling all in manner grand.
The beauty of his magic words,
Put stars in skies, and songs in birds.

He still lives on until this day,
Through every poet, come what may,
Now whene'er a poem's created,
The god of rhymes is duly sated.
+*+*+*+*+*+

© Copyright 2004 Linda L. Dowd - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-04-20 01:41 AM


I've always liked your rhymes, i like the storybook theme in this

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2 posted 2004-04-20 02:04 AM


I hope there's a blessing left over for us benighted folks who don't rhyme....

Good stuff!

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3 posted 2004-04-20 03:36 AM


come what may
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4 posted 2004-04-20 10:31 AM


C? ~

Howdy neighbour! We Canucks stick together! lol Thank you for your kind comments! You put a smile on my soul!

Have a glorious day!

EA

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5 posted 2004-04-20 10:36 AM


Ratleader ~

Dear leader of rats, poetry such as yours most definitely sates the soul of the god of ancient rhymes. The words need not rhyme per se, as long as they reach out and touch the hearts and minds of the readers of them!

Indeed, there are blessings galore for you and more! Thank you for the "good stuff"! A poet appreciating another poet, makes the god of rhymes very happy, indeed!

Continue to read often ~ and write well!


EA

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6 posted 2004-04-20 10:37 AM


passing shadows ~

Yes, "come what may"!

~ May you continue to grow both in your writing and personally!


EA

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7 posted 2004-04-20 02:52 PM


Beautiful!

Eric

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8 posted 2004-04-20 03:47 PM


Eric ~

Ahhh! The "B" word! Merci beaucoups, monsier!


Linda

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9 posted 2004-04-20 04:27 PM


Dear Linda, you have the gift of words and rhymes and your beautiful creations certainly honor the God of Ancient Rhymes.
And he always returns the favor ...
Love and hugs. Margherita

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10 posted 2004-04-20 04:31 PM


Kool write! 'Course I never rhyme, except by accident, so, does he have a brother or someone who takes care of those like me? LOL
Enjoyed . . .

jwesley

OOPS, see you've already answered that...sorry...
and still a KOOL WRITE!

j.

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11 posted 2004-04-20 06:22 PM


Earth Angel
I believe it,

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Don't you know I like that thought?
Indeed I do...

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13 posted 2004-04-20 07:31 PM


Margherita ~

My goodness, Magnificent Margherita, you certainly know how to put the sparkle in my day! Thank you!

Love & Light

Linda

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14 posted 2004-04-20 07:32 PM


jwesley ~

"KOOL" reply! The god of ancient rhymes loves you too!


EA

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15 posted 2004-04-20 07:34 PM


Mr. T. ~

I knew you would believe it ~ because the god of ancient rhymes believes in you!!!

Angel huggums,
EA

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16 posted 2004-04-20 07:35 PM


Sunshine ~

Keep that thought! lol

Love, Light & Poetry,
Linda

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17 posted 2004-04-20 08:50 PM


Rhyme is my favorite kind fof poem, so maybe
He smiles on me??
A good one, my friend.
Hugs,  
Ethel

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18 posted 2004-04-20 10:05 PM


oh course, words of our Angel!
bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
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19 posted 2004-04-21 12:03 PM


Ethel, the god of ancient rhymes smiles upon you big time! ~ and so do I and all of your other readers!

Rhyme away, dear poetess! lol

Linda

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20 posted 2004-04-21 12:06 PM


Bernie ~

Yer slicker than a rink! lol And I love to skate!
Ice Skate

EA

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21 posted 2004-04-21 12:13 PM


Nice writing...James
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22 posted 2004-04-21 01:29 AM


oh,you little songbird...sing sing sing!!
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23 posted 2004-04-21 01:36 AM


James ~

Thank you! I appreciate you saying so!


EA

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24 posted 2004-04-21 01:38 AM


muted ~

Tweet! Tweet! Tweet!
Bird Pooping
Love & Light & Bird Song!
EA

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25 posted 2004-04-21 01:46 AM


LOL LOL LOL LOL
that's cute!!!

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26 posted 2004-04-21 08:54 PM


muted ~

It seems that you have a sense of humor to match my own! lol

Tweets to the Sweet!
EA

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