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jwesley
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0 posted 2004-04-19 09:21 PM


Fragmented Memories
(from Boyhood Tales)


I don’t have a craving
to return to my youth,
but I would like to go back
and smell the rich, black, gumbo dirt
as I smelled it growing up.
I’d like to hear the robins in winter
when I was knee-deep in swamp water,
oblivious of the cold,
have a Killdeer walk up
to within inches of my face as I lay
in a depression in the ground.
I’d like to feel my heart as I did
the first time I fell in love,
my pulse race with the first kiss I ever had,
feel my grandmother hug me again,
my brother call me me-me one more time,
and all the other things
that are fragmented memories now,
things the years have taken away,
things I forgot to hold dear,
that I didn’t know I’d need, again.
I don’t have a craving
to return to my youth . . .
I just want to smell those things,
hear, feel and touch in depth again,
the life that I’ve lived.

w. james beard, jr.
(c) april 2004


© Copyright 2004 Wesley James Beard, Jr. - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
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1 posted 2004-04-19 09:37 PM


I don’t have a craving
to return to my youth . . .
I just want to smell those things,
hear, feel and touch in depth again,
the life that I’ve lived.


Me, too, Jimmy...why is it that those memories are so fragmented...there are times when I can't recall my youthful years...and then all of a sudden they come to light.

hugs
M

jwesley
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2 posted 2004-04-19 10:00 PM


My dear Miss M. - we could really get into a deep philosophical discussion about that, I think, drag in all the age factors, scientific ideas and the like, but I think, in the end, I still would have to tell you . . . I don't know, my lady . . . I just don't know.

hugs to you too...

j.

pictureme
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since 2003-11-28
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3 posted 2004-04-20 12:35 PM


jwesley,
A very enjoyable read
that truely took me down memory lane, some different, some the same, but still wanting to live again!
sweetly remembered
Thanks for your kind words and thoughts!
pictureme :-)

passing shadows
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4 posted 2004-04-20 03:43 AM


there are a few things I miss too...the garden...the porch swing...the railroad tracks...
MGROVES
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5 posted 2004-04-20 10:28 AM


enjoyed


Earth Angel
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6 posted 2004-04-20 10:53 AM


Your fragmented memories brought back a few of my own!

A wondrously nostalgic write!

~ May each new day bring a warm and nostalgic memory for your tomorrows!


EA


Enchantress
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7 posted 2004-04-20 04:56 PM


Love this m'friend...took me back a few years..
Okay...took me back many years.
Hugs~

To have lived the dream of a love so true...
   is to have seen a glimpse of heaven.

Susan
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8 posted 2004-04-20 08:49 PM


I too have that longing at times, to experience what once was once again, not to do it again, but to remember it completely.  Enjoyed this bit of reminiscence.  

Susan

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9 posted 2004-04-20 10:17 PM


good write
bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

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10 posted 2004-04-21 02:07 AM


beautiful memories they are!!! lovely
Corinne
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11 posted 2004-04-22 01:35 PM


James,

Wonderful memories all. Funny how different our memories are from each other, we are indeed like snowflakes.

There is a sadness about this that is disconcerning. Hope I'm reading too much into it, in this case.


Corinne

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12 posted 2004-04-22 02:23 PM


Yeah, me too.
Sandra

ThisDiamond
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13 posted 2004-04-22 10:57 PM


You are a wealthy man JW...and I am so happy about that for you.
TD

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