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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Winter has melted away in just a day Though sleep seems to flurry Pulling night closer in a quiet discontent And resolve turns it’s restless face to the pillow My spirit searches out its refuge through the sand spells Molding form that tenderly remits familiar glow That holds the small of me against your wonder Leaving moist the trails beneath each gentle pass As if to trace the words of love upon my flesh For lilt of winds that whisper past the sash To levitate the wish that keeps me breathing Your heart is firm and warm within my arms A landscape I have learned and traveled Brings sweet dew upon the morning rose Until the fair of dawn arrives to place Your kisses on thoughts left incomplete Copyright Kkh 4/19/04 |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Your heart is firm and warm within my arms A landscape I have learned and traveled Brings sweet dew upon the morning rose Until the fair of dawn arrives to place Your kisses on thoughts left incomplete Ahhh, what a gentle awakening this is! Those kisses may mitigate the distress of something left incomplete in thoughts or dreams ... A very beautiful piece! Love, Margherita  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Until the fair of dawn arrives to place Your kisses on thoughts left incomplete" Beautiful Kathleen.... love these closing lines... left a wonderful feeling. Hugs~ To have lived the dream of a love so true... |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
This leaves me speechless, it's so lovely!  .....jo |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Not that you were ever "bad", but my first thought here was ... you just keep getting better and better. I need to learn how to do that. Loved this... jwesley |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Winter has melted away in just a day Though sleep seems to flurry Pulling night closer in a quiet discontent And resolve turns it’s restless face to the pillow Sadly, nothing really changes all that much, except the temperature, and even then, it's either too hot or too cold. Ha! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wishing I could write like this |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
A real beauty. JL |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Perfect! Eric |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Leaving moist the trails beneath each gentle pass As if to trace the words of love upon my flesh For lilt of winds that whisper past the sash To levitate the wish that keeps me breathing ~*~ I wouldn't call this incomplete... not at all. I enjoyed this very much. |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Speechless, once again. SG |
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