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Center of the Universe
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Center of the Universe |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Center of the Universe Staring at an evening sunset, searching for that global origin. That mystery, faded by gleaning inward its boundaries of brilliant light… Stewards of its blight… Echoed voices singing in high a pitched tone bounding off a golden horizon. Mesmerizing, moving the warmed air aside cracking the ceiling of the gray-blue sky… Guardian of its magnetic cry… Sweeping fingers of purple clouds whisk by touching a smooth surface of earth and sky. Hydroplanes of light tempting imagination knowing where the center must lie… Pointing to its constellation’s center, you and I… Yet the envelope of time is jester of our try to be creator of what we see with a blinded eye. Silver tongued unfathomable seekers of truth yet last, in our learned race against time… That ball of music is its center, yours and mine, and all of mankind… The brightest of the light we could understand yet the center of all the constellations is its shine. The very center of that sunset is in our mind center of the universe, is ours to find… |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Yet the envelope of time is jester of our try to be creator of what we see with a blinded eye. Silver tongued unfathomable seekers of truth yet last, in our learned race against time… What a lovely, mystical write and so very well done. Much enjoyed JL~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Sweeping fingers of purple clouds whisk by touching a smooth surface of earth and sky. Hydroplanes of light tempting imagination knowing where the center must lie… Pointing to its constellation’s center, you and I…" Wow....very nice imagery in this piece. Much enjoyed the read. ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ To have lived the dream of a love so true... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
you are absolutely right, love the concept of your thoughts...brilliant images, very vivid and tranquil... Lovely JL, very much enjoyed |
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