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Substantial Faucet
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Substantial Faucet |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Consensual permit Redefines Mother Nature Pirate thrown against waves of delirium Fragrant breezes Reflective golden brows, raised Like a boa’s embrace First light arrangements culminating Themes by myriad forms Seething world’s illusions Clutching clarity by the breast of outlived dawns Wild, innocent, strong Warrantee coupon Drizzling essence infecting Some beastly countenance Posing and feasting a full naked room Learning to swim in depths Of some caressing firing hearth Strong shoulder sleep Burns like fuel boisterous Incomprehensible to any school Broadening sight to the spirit Naked sight slips out of prison Like some resonating indoctrinating worth All that was cultured becomes void Mystic axis flies like a ball in left field Sparking every car passing Into some wrenching sweet numbmess of life Dreaming osmosis like a Kohler faucet And I adore it, every encouragement! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You are a living Kaleidoscope! Such imagery. Love, Margherita  |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I agree with Margherita. Lee, you paint such a vivid picture with your words..... I wish I could do that. Hugs, Ethel |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
wow! no words to discribe such beauty  |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"Pirate thrown against waves of delirium" Love that line! Great write Lee J. JL |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
too many lines to quote an awesome piece...a beauty like a Kohler faucet |
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