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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Awake The sun has swept across my floor And ate the source of night once more Pulling me from depths of ID Opening realities lid And I reject this open door This purging of enchantments awe For I was happy with the seem The wonders of a wispy dream The sun has cut my source of love The cooing dove, the velvet glove The softness of my loves embrace Surcease for me my private space How cruel can reality be? To take from me this ecstasy To extricate desires lure And make a rich man into poor I would to nip, just one more wink Just one more sip, just one more drink |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I'm a bad, bad, Sun...  Sip the tea of dream once more blink then wink then nod to sleep and I shall let you softly snore to dream the seam of sound and keep...  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
How cruel can reality be? something I ask myself every day.... nice write, Sy and a good morning to you  M |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hi Sy! Sometimes I wonder if we are but only a dream within a dream..you know?  This mornings read was dandy! And may I ask "How's Randy"? Mornings hugs and tea, Nancy~  To have lived the dream of a love so true... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine You are a sweet sun. Good morning Maureen,  Nancy, Randy is dandy. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
oh, how dare that silly ol sun, waking us up like that smiles and hugs |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ Good morning and thank you. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"I would to nip, just one more wink Just one more sip, just one more drink" ~ Cheers! Bottoms up! I'm sending you a brew that will put the pink in your wink! lol  EA |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
How cruel can reality be? To take from me this ecstasy To extricate desires lure And make a rich man into poor Dreams are better than realities sometimes, aren't they? Hugs, Ethel |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The sun has swept across my floor And ate the source of night once more ======================================= ya had me from the first couplet of way cool  and ifins its winkies you want...you know I'll be sending you a lifetime supply.  *winkiewinkie*  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This made me smile, dear Seymour, but how true this can be. A new day is a new challenge. But sometimes it's the opposite too, the night can be fearful, without sweet dreams, and then we welcome the sun as a saviour. Love and hugs. Margherita |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I do love it when the sun goes away, and I sleep through when it comes again, for a few hours anyhow. You will never be poor, m'friend |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel, Can't wait for the brew. Ethel Yes they are sometimes. Hugs JM, Oh Boy a lifetime supply of winkies. WWRS Margherita A smile for a while and a wile. Hugs passing, And you are a sweetheeart. Hugs |
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