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Brad_Smith
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0 posted 2004-04-19 03:46 AM



Define HIS love!

Could you, would you, dare?
Unconditional, how, who's, where?

Define whats there!

Spare the rod, spoil the child
Love in discipline, praise, trial or test.

Define evil
when it workd for good.

Define good
when it brings about pain.

Live and love Light
fear it not
do not hide

What is right
What is might
all defined within HIS sight!

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1 posted 2004-04-19 03:54 AM


very thought-provoking...a great ending
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2 posted 2004-04-19 10:03 AM


it does make you stop and thing. liked this. thanks for sharing


Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2004-04-19 10:06 AM


Brad,
Interesting write.

LeeJ
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4 posted 2004-04-19 10:15 AM


good to see you Brad...this write made me think....I believe only He is able to love unconditionally...no human could ever do that?  Its just not possible...is it?

Smile and hugs

Grover
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5 posted 2004-04-19 10:57 AM


Brad, it's wonderful you love the Lord so much. Keep writing!
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6 posted 2004-04-19 12:46 PM


it does make you think.  thanks


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7 posted 2004-04-19 04:02 PM


Define HIS love!

Could you, would you, dare?
Unconditional, how, who's, where?

Loved this!
      Sadelite

Brad_Smith
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8 posted 2004-04-19 06:51 PM


Thanks everybody! Lee, sure we are able to love unconditionaly, if we have accepted his love and spirit in our hearts. If we could define it or put it in words there would be no reason for any of us to continue writing. Ya, people have f-ed me over and I hate'm but I still love them and would welcome them back in my lives if they so wished. The ones ive "lost" were most likely because I didnt show enough hard love to them. Like God, we hope someday they'll call us up to say hi and remember that we'll always love and forgive them. Peace out everyone, Brad
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