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inkedgoddess
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0 posted 2004-04-18 10:27 PM



Midnight claims the sky
and i wish i was the moon tonight,

bestowed in a halo of glittering starlight
moving across the sparkling black sea
that sleeps beneath me,

pouring between the ghostlike trees
in a golden stream, warming a bittercold night,

a beacon of light on the deer's path
that ventures out past darkness,

watching over the hopeless romantics
that wait for slumber to embrace their emptiness,

to gather up their hearts and wishes,
transform their tears and fears,
and return to them the faith and love
that they surrender nightly in dreams,

for just one night

to give freely that which i seek
without hesitation, fear, or doubt,

for the whole world below
to resonate in my love.


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MGROVES
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1 posted 2004-04-18 10:42 PM


simply beautifull


jwesley
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2 posted 2004-04-18 11:33 PM


Well! Guess I missed this before but certainly glad I didn't this time...truly enjoyed your words my friend...

jwesley

pictureme
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3 posted 2004-04-18 11:55 PM


inkedgoddess,
Enjoy your nick and your post...had me
wishing also!
interesting read.
pictureme :-)

Kaoru
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4 posted 2004-04-19 02:45 AM


..and so the goddess writes..

beautifully, of course.

bklynboy
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5 posted 2004-04-24 08:28 AM


bump
nakdthoughts
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6 posted 2004-04-24 08:37 AM


watching over the hopeless romantics
that wait for slumber to embrace their emptiness,


so true, Michele..love the new picture...

hugs
M

vandana
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7 posted 2004-04-24 10:29 AM


nice read
inkedgoddess
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8 posted 2004-04-24 11:41 AM


thanks for looking it again on this one
Local Rebel
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9 posted 2004-04-24 12:04 PM


I bet there were one or two who thought you hung the moon!  

nice work kid..

Earth Angel
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10 posted 2004-04-24 01:03 PM


inked goddess, sometimes I think you ARE the moon! lol

Thanks for the repost of this lunar delight!

Moon magic,

EA

passing shadows
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11 posted 2004-04-25 02:17 PM


never had thought of that, but it's a nice wish
iliana
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12 posted 2004-04-25 03:19 PM


Inkedgoddess -- you are a truly beautiful soul if I am permitted to say so.  Lovely poem!     Your love radiates!  
Enchantress
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13 posted 2004-04-25 03:20 PM


Yes it is...moon magic!
Love it!
Hugs~

To have lived the dream of a love so true...
   is to have seen a glimpse of heaven.

Grover
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14 posted 2004-04-25 04:37 PM


Ah! What a pleasant read!
garysgirl
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15 posted 2004-04-25 04:41 PM


for just one night

to give freely that which i seek
without hesitation, fear, or doubt,

for the whole world below
to resonate in my love.


This is so sweet. It shows the compassion
that you have for others.




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