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VAS
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0 posted 2004-04-18 01:20 PM



In Want of a Masterpiec

she went to the keypboard
to create a masterpiece

;lakjpituuherwaih
akjjklgdfaihertw
alhjoijtjoijdlkdfsm
aslkjgkljeojaghjjes

this is all she got
her spirit was willing
her heart was light
but her head and hands

were weak

©April 18, 2004

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

© Copyright 2004 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2004-04-18 01:24 PM


some days just aren't good, are they?

I often come up with those same lines

muted
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2 posted 2004-04-18 01:37 PM


oh, i recognize that piece! LOL, very true, we have those days
Susan
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walking the surreal
3 posted 2004-04-18 04:40 PM


This is great fun and on some days so very true, mwkleismv.e!

Susan

Sadelite
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4 posted 2004-04-18 04:41 PM


VAS,
  Very clever write.  I've given up on masterpieces, I just write.  I admire those who seek more...
                     Sadelite

GG
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Lost in thought
5 posted 2004-04-18 04:43 PM


wow... and all I came up with was
"AHHHHHH!!!
GRR,
bleh...
Blah!"
I'd say you've got alot lol

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

Grover
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6 posted 2004-04-22 11:35 AM


Great insight...
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