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After the rain.
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After the rain. |
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vega Junior Member
since 2004-04-12
Posts 24wherever I lay my hat. |
After the rain when the sun shines again and the storm clouds have drifted away. When the skies return blue I'll be thinking of you and the good times we shared on the way. As the laughter renews with the summertime hues and the soft winds of change breeze on in. I'll be able to sigh with no tears in my eyes and a newlife will somehow begin. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This is a very lovely song and so positive. Welcome to Passions! Love, Margherita  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS! Very nicely penned first post! I look forward to seeing more of your work. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ To have lived the dream of a love so true... |
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SEA 
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Yes, this is very sing-songy I enjoyedWelcome! |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Vega, Welcome to PIP!!! This is a cheery write of hope. I'll be happy to get to that place of which you speak. ~K~ |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
 A beautiful first post this is! a very lovely flow, gentle. Sorry im a little late greeting you..but so happy you are here. enjoyed (please check your email for a special PIP greeting) |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
lovely lyrical hope-filled etchings I do so love the ending..."somehow begin." Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
I liked this alot. Reminds me of stuff I will be looking out for you -Juju |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 sweet!Welcome! Welcome to Passions! |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Very nice, vega...Welcome to passions!! |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
feels a bit lonely, but definitely very hopeful. A great write, Welcome to the Blue Pages Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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zenny Member
since 2002-11-24
Posts 371Belgium |
Welcome to PiP, vega! Your first write allready made me speechless, im anxious to see ur next ones welcome! Zenny |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
We hope...James |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Lovely imagery. The words flow nicely. Welcome. This forum is a wonderful feast. Enjoy. Susan |
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azblond Senior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 637The Steamy Desert |
Mmm...almost makes me wish for rain! Thanks for sharing! Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind... |
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vega Junior Member
since 2004-04-12
Posts 24wherever I lay my hat. |
Thank you all so much for your welcomes and the lovely comments Take care ... |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Welcome!!! Enjoyed your first post and I look forward to the next. "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Beautiful emotion and a wonderful poem! JL |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
This sounds like a Hallmark card So beautifully done |
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