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dingusjr
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0 posted 2004-04-18 10:52 AM



Making love
Without love
Is like fishing
In a septic tank.
You don't want
What you might catch.

© Copyright 2004 Larry W. Allen - All Rights Reserved
Grover
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1 posted 2004-04-18 11:22 AM


A bottom line lesson here... ouch!
Kahlil
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2 posted 2004-04-18 11:32 AM


Well, I was going to say that making love without love is just a matter of mechanics, but your analogy got me hooked!  ~K~
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3 posted 2004-04-18 11:55 AM


lmao this was great!!!


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4 posted 2004-04-18 12:13 PM



Larry, it's good to see your wit again!
Welcome home!

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5 posted 2004-04-18 12:13 PM


fantastic way to say it!!
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6 posted 2004-04-18 01:19 PM


hehehe....good one
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7 posted 2004-04-18 01:30 PM


Indeed!  Your catchy title brought me right in.
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8 posted 2004-04-18 01:33 PM


Excellent write!!
Hugs~

To have lived the dream of a love so true...
   is to have seen a glimpse of heaven.

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9 posted 2004-04-20 01:34 AM


....ewww....this appeals to my professional sensibilities as well as my poetic sense....bullseye!

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10 posted 2004-04-20 02:42 AM


I don't think one can honestly "make love", if love is not there,,,,,plain old sex is easy to toss around,,but I agree,,what you get,,,will probably stink...

Michelle

I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike

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11 posted 2004-04-21 12:23 PM


True enough...James
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