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The Dawning Cometh
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The Dawning Cometh |
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Fisherman Junior Member
since 2000-04-14
Posts 46 |
Cool is the color of first blush of dawn, With songbirds a singing on a dew laden lawn, Whispers of breezes call out to those sleeping, Awaken my children, as new day is creeping From ocean to seashore; high mountain to valley, Sun’s rainbowed eruption in night’s grand finale. Shadows are fleeing before morning’s come, Ceding to Helios in diurnal succumb. I rise in my chambers, cross to window’s pane, To drink of the dawning, heav’ns glorious refrain. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Fisherman Your net is full, enjoyed. |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Very nice.  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Enchanting! Love, Margherita |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a descriptive piece I like this |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Like this one MUCHO! JL |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Sun’s rainbowed eruption in night’s grand finale. Shadows are fleeing before morning’s come, Ceding to Helios in diurnal succumb. I rise in my chambers, cross to window’s pane, To drink of the dawning, heav’ns glorious refrain. ~*~ All should be able to view the coming as you do... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Fisherman~ This is as fine a piece as I will read this day~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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