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GG
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Lost in thought

0 posted 2004-04-18 06:01 AM



It was a Kodak moment
for your picture perfect face.

One of those
star light,
hold me tight,
kind of times...


And I fold you in my pocket
between a couple Fives.
Just so, when I need to,
I can look into your eyes.

Those picture perfect eyes...

You always smelled of musk
and something, just enough,
to make the depth of me fall deep,
           so deep
in need of you.

And here I am, a storm again,
imagining your smile, again.
I'm lost and I'm alone again...

I only wish you cared.

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

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Margherita
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Eternity
1 posted 2004-04-18 09:43 AM


Alyssa, this is a very charming write. Perfectly done.
Wishing you that he WILL care ...
Love and hugs. Margherita

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2 posted 2004-04-18 09:51 AM


And here I am, a storm again,
imagining your smile, again.
I'm lost and I'm alone again...

I only wish you cared.


Sweet Alyssa, maybe they care, but
don't know how to show that they do?
Good writing, sweet friend.
Hugs  
Ethel

Grover
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3 posted 2004-04-18 10:15 AM


Alyssa, I really enjoyed this poem.
passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2004-04-18 01:27 PM


sometimes I think we should smash the camera on the ground and never look back

loveya

GG
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Lost in thought
5 posted 2004-04-18 02:13 PM


Margherita,
Thank you   ..Perfectly done? woah, not quite sure on that, but very kind of you to say! Hugs to you...

Ethel,
well, this was written about someone I chose to fall in love with (not a common thing for me, he's the only one I've ever let myself fall in love with). Once he realised that I wasn't into childish dating and that my intentions for courting him were to scan him for marriage, he ran (broke up with me via email and shut off all contact with me). Anyway, guess that isn't unexpected... I just thought more of him. And the problem with me falling in love, is that I stay in love, forever... and forever I mourn the loss of them. But I know he doesn't care...
whew, really didn't mean to get into all of that. I just miss him, still. thanks for your reply  

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

[This message has been edited by GG (04-18-2004 04:07 PM).]

GG
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since 2002-12-03
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Lost in thought
6 posted 2004-04-18 02:15 PM


Grover,
thank you I'm glad you did...

Dixie,
probably a good idea... wish I could harden my heart just enough to do that, I really do *sigh* thanks for your words

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2004-04-21 07:10 PM


Fantastic...how many times have I only wished she cared...James
GG
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Lost in thought
8 posted 2004-05-08 11:55 AM


James,
thanks for your reply ..and, yeah, I imagine we all wish that too many times....

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

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